I'm not a horror guy, but I liked this a lot. Creepy, great twist and just the right side of funny to make me smile... writing that I'm now a little uncomfortable that it did make me smile. Maybe that's wrong... you'll have to come over and read it for yourself, take the chair in the corner, get comfy... switch the light on... you'll be fine.
That's great! really imaginative. had no idea where it was going although the premise is a bit hazy around who Eleanor is... how she's there in the first place. but no matter. its a good piece of writing for sure. great debut here. keep em coming!
This has a lot of good stuff going on. I have a few observations but I don’t want to just type them at you without permission. And you’re under no obligation to grant that permission. It’s a fun read.
Omg , I just love this one! A screaming lamp powered by the souls it consumes! Very Original!
Thanks for giving it a read. 💡
Dang, man. A first short of many to come, I hope! This was fantastic—dark and creepy. Loved it.
Thanks so much, Shane!
Great story and nicely written.
I finally got around to reading it. I liked it. Great idea and nicely told.
Really appreciate you checking it out!
Carried me along. Good job.
Hi there! Really nice prose. There were a couple parts I had questions about. Overall, it was a fun read.
Wow 😮 I need more!!!
I'm not a horror guy, but I liked this a lot. Creepy, great twist and just the right side of funny to make me smile... writing that I'm now a little uncomfortable that it did make me smile. Maybe that's wrong... you'll have to come over and read it for yourself, take the chair in the corner, get comfy... switch the light on... you'll be fine.
The screams are diabolical. Creepy af!!
That's great! really imaginative. had no idea where it was going although the premise is a bit hazy around who Eleanor is... how she's there in the first place. but no matter. its a good piece of writing for sure. great debut here. keep em coming!
This has a lot of good stuff going on. I have a few observations but I don’t want to just type them at you without permission. And you’re under no obligation to grant that permission. It’s a fun read.
This was fun! I'm into Rosa turning the lights on, just listening to the screams...
Wow, Rosa is so rude.
She’s not someone you’d want to be stuck in a basement with.
Really liked the twist!
Glad you enjoyed it!
"They're the sounds I made when I found him" gave me the chills, and then that ending! More please...