I'm not a horror guy, but I liked this a lot. Creepy, great twist and just the right side of funny to make me smile... writing that I'm now a little uncomfortable that it did make me smile. Maybe that's wrong... you'll have to come over and read it for yourself, take the chair in the corner, get comfy... switch the light on... you'll be fine.
That's great! really imaginative. had no idea where it was going although the premise is a bit hazy around who Eleanor is... how she's there in the first place. but no matter. its a good piece of writing for sure. great debut here. keep em coming!
This has a lot of good stuff going on. I have a few observations but I don’t want to just type them at you without permission. And you’re under no obligation to grant that permission. It’s a fun read.
I'm not a horror guy, but I liked this a lot. Creepy, great twist and just the right side of funny to make me smile... writing that I'm now a little uncomfortable that it did make me smile. Maybe that's wrong... you'll have to come over and read it for yourself, take the chair in the corner, get comfy... switch the light on... you'll be fine.
The screams are diabolical. Creepy af!!
This was fun! I'm into Rosa turning the lights on, just listening to the screams...
Well done… but I'm already in the bed 🛌 and now I can't sleep aaaaa :)
Wow, Rosa is so rude.
She’s not someone you’d want to be stuck in a basement with.
Really liked the twist!
Glad you enjoyed it!
Hi there! Really nice prose. There were a couple parts I had questions about. Overall, it was a fun read.
Wow 😮 I need more!!!
That's great! really imaginative. had no idea where it was going although the premise is a bit hazy around who Eleanor is... how she's there in the first place. but no matter. its a good piece of writing for sure. great debut here. keep em coming!
This has a lot of good stuff going on. I have a few observations but I don’t want to just type them at you without permission. And you’re under no obligation to grant that permission. It’s a fun read.