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i liked this very much.

very poetic.

the use of the senses was excellent. I can smell mown grass... that you aligned this with flavours of death was an interesting choice.

The sense of memory in this resonated with a poem i recently was compelled to write. i didnt know how it would come out but it had to; and a poem it was, this thing that had to come out. I don't usually write poetry.

Maybe you would like it and maybe it would resonate with you and your piece?

It's called "of history" and it's on my stack. I won't drop the link into your post. I feel on balance this is usually a rude thing to do and I don't do it unless something is "Really Striking" in terms of resonance or coincidence and compulsion.

Keep up the good work!😎

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